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poem in the well
someone needs to pull it up

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:iconalexeiz:
Squaring, are we?

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l'échappatoire [link]
asémantique [link]
photos de fond de poches [link]
:icondocsonian:
yea....I have to say
the bottom border is gone
it was not helping the photo
and I started realizing it was bothering me.
so here we are
phase 2
act III

and the actors begin

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the last shot

in the wake of an eye
gone as fast as the blue passes to night
and the gates swing back
to their final resting place
shut tight
like the final final at closing time


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:iconalexeiz:
i want to see what's next on the neverending play

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l'échappatoire [link]
asémantique [link]
photos de fond de poches [link]
:iconslpdomain:
waiting for wigs
while waiting on wings
Jonathan assumes himself cornered
a cosmic mess he says
but his hollering
can not breech the bubbled
belly bloating its whimsical
tease his way.
hovering
heaving
hows it been
sidetracked the
flocks acrobatic
diversion
invites not the audience
of the beast
he is on his own
he knows that now
sucked by seizures
of fear
he tucks his wings
neath his down
and dives
:iconslpdomain:
take two
*

counting
the burst bubbles
of naivety
petrified
liquidized
the bloody
placenta of guilt
reduced life to a verse
in stanza he hoped rhymed
it was all a diversion
from the sliver of steel
the blue ice that left
a numbness he took solace in

wings equated all any man
could hope for
flight
fancy
freedom
but --from what
that too he hoped rhymed
yet somehow--none of it mattered
there were colours to entice
and dreams to amuse
and counting pennies
to pay all the debt
of futility dues.
:iconsenorjoe:
while I'm always impressed with your work, I like this one especially. there's a certain flow to it and I like the birds you've captured. very nice
:iconpeanut-olive:
keep up the great work :D

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Watch Me If You Want Thank You :D
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I Would Really Appreciate it if you looked at my gallery and fav some work D :D
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:icondocsonian:
will do
thanks

--
the last shot

in the wake of an eye
gone as fast as the blue passes to night
and the gates swing back
to their final resting place
shut tight
like the final final at closing time


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